Informal Writing 2
Querido Señora Nelson,
¡Tu tiene una carrera muy interesante! Yo seria una enfermera también. Yo tengo
preguntas por tu.
¿Cual universidad fuiste? ¿Estaba muy difícil o fácil en la universidad o el hospital? ¿Recibes muchas horas? ¿Que te gusta mejor de tu trabajo? ¿Que te no gusta de tu trabajo?
¿Puedes ayudarme preparar para mi carrera? Cuando el la tiempo bueno parati?
Yo quiero mucho seria una enfermera y yo apreciar tu ayuda mucho.
Sinceramente,
Magen
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2 comments:
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Christine
Assignment:
Informal Writing #2
Date:
10/26/2007
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
5
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
4
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
4
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked how you asked about different aspects of the job.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
Why do you want to be a nurse?
Some suggestions for next time:
Check over your verb tenses. Estaba muy = Esta Cuando el la tiempo bueno para ti (doesn't make sense) En tu trabajo, cuando tienes un buen tiempo? (maybe change to)
Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
informal writing 2
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
very creative
I have the following questions about your assignment:
was it divertido?
Some suggestions for next time:
rock harder
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