Friday, 14 September 2007

Informal Writing #1

Escribe un mensaje electrónico. Imagina que escribes a una amiga por correspondencia de México que acaba de saber que va a asistir a tu colegio el año entrante, como estudiante do intercambio. Saluda a tu amiga y
· Expresa tu reacción a las noticias
· Describe tu colegio y menciona algunas actividades escolares que le interesarían
· Ofrece deseos apropiados a el o ella

Querido Leticia,
¡Hola Leticia! ¿Cómo estas? Estoy bien. Soy de Rancho Cordova. Estoy en el grado doce en mi escuela. Cuando yo recibió tu noticias sobre tu acaba ir a mi escuela, estoy muy emocionada. En mi colegio, está mucho actividades y clubes. Actividades incluir fútbol, fútbol americano, y béisbol. Los clubes incluir club de interact, club de filipino, y club de CSF. Es un buen idea a hacer todos tu tarea y recibe buenas notas.
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2 comments:

Magen said...

Writing Rubric: Self-Assessment

Name: Magen

Date: 9/14/07

Assignment: Un mesaje electronico

Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
no

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
no

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
no

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
yes

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes


What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I think i did just ok on this assignment. I think i could have done better and put in more detail.

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
Next time i think i need to focus and improve on the amount of detail i put in my writing.

14 September 2007 at 09:54
Anonymous said...

Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
un mesaje electronico informal 1?
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5

The central theme of the writing is clear.
5

The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5

The assignment is interesting to read.
5

There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4

The sentences relate to each other.
5

The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5

The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5

The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5

The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5

The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5

The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5

The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5


What I really liked about this assignment:
very sweet. touched my heart

I have the following questions about your assignment:
nada

Some suggestions for next time:
love more

17 December 2007 at 18:34

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