Pandilleros
Está más de 12,000 miembros de pandillos en El Salvador. Pero más de 5,000 miembros reciban servicos de rehabilitación de drogas. Luis Ernesto Romero es un ex pandillero en El Salvador. Romero tiene la responsibilidad a hacer los pandilleros trabajar en una panderilla. Romero cambie cuando su hija nació. Ahora, Romero ayuda muchas personas enrevesadas en las pandillas. Yo creo que Romero es una persona muy bueno porque él es cambiante el mundo.
Está más de 12,000 miembros de pandillos en El Salvador. Pero más de 5,000 miembros reciban servicos de rehabilitación de drogas. Luis Ernesto Romero es un ex pandillero en El Salvador. Romero tiene la responsibilidad a hacer los pandilleros trabajar en una panderilla. Romero cambie cuando su hija nació. Ahora, Romero ayuda muchas personas enrevesadas en las pandillas. Yo creo que Romero es una persona muy bueno porque él es cambiante el mundo.
3 comments:
Name:
Magen
Date:
10-17-07
Assignment:
Formal Writing 1- Pandilleros
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
no
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
yes
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
no
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
no
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
no
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
On this assignment i think i stated my opinion well.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
Next time i think i need to focus on writing in more detail.
Writing Rubric: Peer-Assessment
Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Danny
Assignment:
Formal Writing #1
Date:
10/17/07
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
4
The assignment is interesting to read.
4
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
4
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
4
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
4
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
4
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
4
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
4
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
4
What I really liked about this assignment:
I liked the history that the writer put.
I have the following questions about your assignment:
What was the difference between the two articles?
Some suggestions for next time:
Put more of an opinion and make it a little longer.
Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
Formal Writing 1
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
todos terrificos
I have the following questions about your assignment:
nothing it was a wonderfully written assignment
Some suggestions for next time:
keep it chill
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