Formal Writing #2
Paz
Paz es una idea muy bueno. Pero, desafortunadamente el mundo no tengo mucha paz. Todos los días los personas luchan en los calles, en los escuelas, y en todos países. Yo creo que paz sería muy buena para el medio ambiente y para todos personas. Colombia tiene el idea derecho con el “el día internacional de paz” (fuente 1). Colombia no tiene mucho paz. Cuando el mundo es en paz, personas estaría más alegre. Los jóvenes del mundo entintaría a ayudar con el causa del paz por que el condición de el mundo es sus futuros.
2 comments:
Name:
Magen
Date:
9/28/07
Assignment:
Formal Writing #2
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
yes
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
no
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
no
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
no
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
no
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I think i got my opinion and point across so people will know where i stand on this subject.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
Next time i think i need to try to write more and write more detail.
Student Writer:
Magen
Student Reviewer:
Laura
Assignment:
Formal Writing 2
Date:
121707
The assignment is legible (written neatly or typed).
5
The central theme of the writing is clear.
5
The writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
5
The assignment is interesting to read.
5
There are enough details and examples to make the ideas understandable.
4
The sentences relate to each other.
5
The ideas are appropriate for the culture.
5
The sentence structures are overall correct and understandable.
5
The writer uses punctuation correctly.
5
The writer has checked spelling so that spelling is overall correct.
5
The writer uses verb tenses correctly.
5
The writer uses correct subject/verb agreements.
5
The writer uses gender agreements correctly.
5
What I really liked about this assignment:
so formal
I have the following questions about your assignment:
how did it feel to make such a beautiful piece of work?
Some suggestions for next time:
rock out with... your...???????
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